Jump: Chapter One (A boy on a journey of faith)

Boy Jumps off Tree

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I’ve been working on my next novel, “Jump,” which is about a boy who grows up in a fundamentalist Christian household where his parents test his faith each year by forcing him to jump off the tree in his back yard. I originally began writing this book in 2008 while in Iraq. At first it was supposed to be just a short story, but then it grew to be something much bigger. I had to put the novel down for a few years with the start of my photography business and then with the birth of my son, Phoenix.

Right now I’m roughly 50,000 words into the first draft, which is probably half way done.

Here is the first sample chapter.




When I was a young boy, my parents made us jump off the tree in our back yard on our birthday. This was to measure our faith. This was not the same thing other children in our neighborhood did. They never jumped off trees on their birthday. They stood with their backs against the kitchen wall, chins up, while their parents drew lines with a pencil where the top of their heads touched the wall.

On my eight birthday I told my mother we were the only ones who did this. She said the other parents were fools.

“Height doesn’t get their children to Heaven,” she said. “Faith is what takes you. Now climb up that tree and jump.”


At age five I took my first leap of faith. I landed in my father’s arms. It was only the first branch up, but my father ruffled my hair, held me against his chest, said I had the faith of a boy twice my age.

“You’re going to be a great man of faith some day,” he said. “God will honor you and make you do great things for Him. He will be so proud of what you will accomplish.”

I looked up at my father’s face. His happiness was enough to satisfy me. I hugged his neck, swelling in his pride. I loved how his thick, umber-colored beard felt against my cheek. He kissed me on the forehead and I could barely feel his lips through his beard.

That year, my mother became pregnant, and soon her belly swelled and a baby came out of her. It was a girl. It was born in the spring. I didn’t know how any of this worked until much later. What I remember from the pregnancy is my father crouching low to my mother’s belly, pressing his cheek and hands over it daily. That was the first time I had to share my father’s pride. I thought he was inflating her stomach with his touch the way he would inflate me with his bearded kisses.

When mother and father came home with baby Arminelle from the hospital, their faces glowing, their bodies hovering over her every gurgle, I told myself I would reach the top of our tree one day. They would forget all about Arminelle then. Except, every year the tree seemed to grow taller. Or maybe it was my fear growing bigger because I knew I had to jump from a branch higher than the year before. By the time I turned nine, the tree seemed twice as tall as my house. I would never reach the top.


# # #

I looked down at my parents from five branches up. By then, I was too big for my father to catch. Instead, he held little Arminelle in one arm, joyous, looking up and awaiting my show of faith. At the bed of the tree we had piled a mound of soft dirt covered in leaves. That was my landing zone. It would break my fall.

I recited Psalm 91 aloud, trusting in God to keep me safe, calling to Him to reinforce my faith. My parents had me memorize the psalm for just this occasion.


… No evil shall befall you,

Nor shall any plague come near your dwelling;

For He shall give His angles charge over you,

To keep you in all your ways.

In their hands they shall bear you up,

Lest you dash your foot against a stone…


I pictured the promise of the Psalm. I pictured angles appointed by God reaching out for my arms and slow down my fall so that not even my foot would be hurt.

“Are you ready?” I shouted down.

Mother’s face gleamed with excitement; my father’s with a fervor glow.

“Jump!” they shouted back.

“Jump Christopher!” little Arminelle joined. “The angels will float you.”

Hearing her tiny voice brought a twitch to my face. I wasn’t doing this for her. I felt an urge to land on top of my sister then. Drop-kick her right in her four-year-old face. Her eyes stared up at me with such brightness.

They weren’t so far down after all. I wasn’t so high.

A thought came over me.

Maybe my father would catch me. If I overshot the dirt, he would have to catch me. I was his son. He would drop Arminelle and hold open his arms for me. They were testing my faith. Maybe I could test their love.

I leapt off the branch. The fall seemed to last so long. Like hanging. I hovered right overtop my father, and in mid-air it felt I would never come down. My father was a strong man. I saw him below me. He would catch me …

The crack of my leg breaking ran up my spine to my throat. The last image I remember before passing out from the pain was my mother crouching away, hands flailing to cover her head, my father turning to shield little Arminelle. My memory went black.

At the hospital the doctor asked me what happened.

“I jumped off a tree,” I said.


“What he means is he fell,” mother said, both hands touching the doctor on the arm gently, her eyes looking up at him sweetly.

“You fell,” my father said, his voice gruff.

I didn’t want to look at my father’s eyes.

I prayed to God for the doctor to say something.

But the doctor seemed baffled, lips open but no words coming out. He and my father were long-time buddies. Nobody ever left this town, but rather built their lives into it. The two men shared a glance, and there was such a tenderness in my father that even I believed I had fallen off the tree when I finally looked at him.

Finally he looked down at me. A look that made my body shrink as I sat on the hospital bed.

“You fell. You fell on your own and all by yourself,” he told me.

By that I knew what he meant. I fell without faith.

“Yes, father,” I said, each word held in obedience.

“Liars lose their tongue, you know.”

“Yes.” A whisper.


On the way home, we rode in the car with the radio knob turned a notch away from blowing the speakers. A man spoke of hell’s fire, said his audience should give up the luxuries of life to earn the riches of Heaven. Give up the luxuries now!  He screamed this as a fact. “Make your wallets empty and your spirits full,” the man shouted.

Father turned down the volume and turned to me as he drove.

“Do you know why I was mad at you just then?”

“Because I broke my leg and the medical bills will make you broke, Mother said.”

“No, that ain’t why.”

I didn’t give a second guess.

“Because your faith broke in mid-air, and that’s what broke your leg, which will make my bank account broke. But last part don’t matter. Can’t go to Heaven rich.”

Then he knocked on my cast with one knuckle.

“That’s all right, though. Faith will heal, and so will your leg.”

I prayed for my leg to never heal again. I didn’t want to jump off trees anymore. At school, kids called me the Jumping Jesus Freak. Some called me Broken Hip Bible Boy. My leg healed in a few months because the break was clean, but that didn’t put an end to either one of my nicknames. It didn’t put an end to my jumps, either.

A week before my tenth birthday, father asked what I wanted for a present.

“Present?” I asked. This was the first time my parents had ever mentioned birthday gifts. I knew other boys received toys. They showed off slingshots and G.I. Joes every day at school. To my parents, toys were no better than worldly attachments; objects that satisfied the flesh but did nothing for the soul.

“Ask and you shall receive,” Father said.



“A toy gun?”

Father thought this over, pinching his beard at his chin. His eyes darted away, and then came back to me.

“How ‘bout a sword instead?”

“A sword?”

“A sword.”

His eyes widened as he said this.

“Can it shoot flames?”

“Even better. It burns the wicked.”


He nodded.

Every day that week I thought of the boys at school who called me a freak and broken hipped. I pictured running around school with my new sword, smiting bullies and burning their demon flesh. Chopping heads and bursting clothes to flames. I would judge the wicked and spare the good. I would have the coolest birthday present among all the boys. If anyone tried to show off anything cooler, I would burn that too.

“You have to earn it of course,” my father said, chin up now, amused by seeing me getting lost in my thoughts.

“Anything. I’ll do anything. Tear the weeds, clean the shed, mow the lawn—”

My father crouched low and took my tiny hands in his massive own. He pressed his lips to my forehead. He smiled wanly, then fixed his face still.

“Jump,” he said. “That’s all. Show faith and you’ve got your sword.”

I jumped. Another birthday, another branch. No broken leg this time.

When I picked myself off the ground, brushed off the dirt and bits of leaves, father urged little Arminelle to come to me. She held a large package in her tiny arms. It was the shape of a box, wrapped in brown paper and straps tied around it as a ribbon.

“What’s this?”

“Happy birthday, Christopher.”

“What is it?”

“Your sword,” she whispered, as if telling me a secret she wasn’t supposed to reveal.

I took the weight of the gift in my hands. I looked at father. He made a gesture with his hand. Go on. He held mother in one arm, a hidden smile behind his beard.

I looked at the gift, up again, then back down at the package. It was big enough that I needed both hands to hold it. It couldn’t be a sword. Unless this was a box, and the sword was tiny. But this was dense. I shook the present. Nothing rattled. It was solid all the way through.

I pulled the ribbon and unwrapped the package.

“Happy birthday son,” father said.

“What is this?”

“It’s your sword.”  He stepped closer.

“It’s not a sword.”

“ ‘Course it is.”

“It’s not even a toy gun.”

“That’s the one you wanted.”

“I didn’t want this.”

“Sure you did, son.”

“No. No I didn’t. It’s not what I asked for.”

“It cuts the wicked, son,” an edge to his tone. He stepped closer still.

“Nothing but a damn book.”

I muttered this last part, but I knew my father heard me well when he asked, “What did you say?”

It was a question he asked even if he already knew. I don’t remember many beatings from my childhood. But I do remember that one.

The bible – the sword – fell to the ground when Father snatched me up and took me inside. The beating made me wish I had broken my leg again that year. I remember it was the first time his hand ever came down as a fist instead of a slap.



About Michel Sauret

I'm a independent and literary fiction author and Pittsburgh-based photographer


  1. I think this is a good first chapter, because it’s so loaded with potential. It seems to me that the father is fatally mistaken, in making his son perform one of the Temptations of Christ. I looked it up (on WIKI, I’m embarrassed to admit):

    “If thou be the Son of God, cast thyself down from hence: For it is written, He shall give his angels charge over thee, to keep thee: And in their hands they shall bear thee up, lest at any time thou dash thy foot against a stone.” (Luke 4:9-13) citing Psalms 91:12.
    Once more, Jesus maintained his integrity and responded by quoting scripture, saying, “Again it is written, ‘You shall not put the Lord, your God, to the test.'” (Matthew 4:7) from Deuteronomy 6:16.

    I think most readers will want to find out how – indeed, IF – the narrator is going to “maintain his integrity” in the face of his father’s mistakenness and casuistry and own obvious lack of faith. Why doesn’t he jump himself? I rather wish he would (break his neck) but it’s inappropriate for anyone to jump, since it reduces faith to a circus act.

    First chapters are leap of faith enough.
    Thanks for sharing yours!

    P.S. Typos: “angEls” and “slowING”….

    • Thanks so much for taking the time to read this chapter. It’s definitely a work in progress and I’m glad you caught those typos. Thanks! Christopher does break his arm on one jump. I thought that was included in this sample.

  2. As Jon says, so many places to go.

    Having grown up in a very religious family and environment, so much of this seemed true. Many of my friends and classmates experienced various similar abuses in the name of religion (never heard of anyone jumping, though). Many of them are now atheist or agnostic. Some, however, are still very religious and propagating their upbringing through their own families.

    So, yes, many ways this could go.

  3. My pleasure. I’m honored that you’d post my 2 cents worth. I suppose a related issue here is grace. Does grace depend on faith? I don’t think that’s theologically correct. Grace depends on nothing of ours. Strikes me that you have a very Protestant/Calvinist story here!

    Anyway, here’s a link to some of my own stuff, which is a lot worse. Cheers.

    • Hey Jon, I personally hold a very reformed view of salvation, and the novel will grow to explore the various denominations of Christianity as a cautionary tale of the dangers man can commit when we take a light or lose view on doctrine, theology and scripture. It will not be intended to crown one denomination or denounce another, but hopefully will serve as a cautionary tale to all Christians, myself included.

  4. Then I think you’re well on your way. I think the danger of such a work would be its becoming abstract or forced, but in your case the ideas seem to come out of the events, and not be imposed on them. Which is good because otherwise you’d be writing a theological treatise.

    I’ve read that American culture is still very Calvinist at the core, so I suppose one could be Calvinist and atheist at the same time. It’s so basic it seems to transcend denomination.

    I’m reading your piece about the body found in the park. I suppose it appeals to me more directly, because I live in an old neighborhood, Parkdale Toronto. I think you describe the grim joylessness of the job quite well. So far I like it. I guess I’d better wait till I say more, in the right place. Cheers!

  5. I know! I was thinking about your readers * – and about American culture generally. I think aspects of it remain protestant, and Calvinist, without belief in Christ or God – ideas of work, success, chance, fate, freedom, church and state, good and evil, etc. If well-written, your book should appeal to atheists too! If Dostoevsky did, believing in the greatness of the Czars (?) and the superiority of the “Slav Soul” – whatever THAT is – so can you! Now, there’s a challenge!

    *Myself included!

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